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What if this is the last day?
When everything is turned upside down
When you start to miss the things that doesn’t exist
Still hoping for tomorrow to become present

What if there is no room anymore?
No space to dwell inside
And spirit that you strengthened all your time
Is released to the starved hollow

What if all the writings will be erased?
No one will remember anymore
The history of love, wars and dreams will fade
And to set the memorials will be impossible

What if you suddenly realized?
Today is the day when all the lies will be exposed
The blinding truth will fall with its weight
People are too dead to live

What if there is no tomorrow?
Time has a leak
You are motionless
Against the fate
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Poem about 21 December
For contest "What If The World Ends?"
Also inspired by song Snow Patrol - What If The Storm Ends? [link]
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~EaglesPhotography Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
That's awesome!! it's surprising you didn't win, it's a very good poem!
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:iconhitorus:
Thank you! :) It's more important for me to take a part of contest, and in this case winning doesn't matter :]
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~EaglesPhotography Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
that's the spirit! you're really good at poems though continue like that mi amigo! :)
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:iconminetherzog:
fantastic one :clap:
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:iconhitorus:
Ow thanks! Though I didn't win, it was a lot of fun anyway :]
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:iconminetherzog:
like it, u are a super poet, like ur style, its a kinda i like to try :)
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:iconhitorus:
Thank you ^^ Always try new things!
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~Amber-Icefire Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is AMAZING. I really like your style. :happybounce:
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:iconhitorus:
Thanks for your pleasure :)
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Mood: Love ~Redbuick95 Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
love it
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